Description: We had to write a quick write about the song Where is the love? by the Black Eyed Peas.
I was walking down the road as I saw a homeless man he had a sign that said “where is the love?”. I called my friends and we said “we’re going to make a change!”. So we got food and beds. We saw the man crying so we gave him an air bed and some food he said “God bless you”
Thursday, 22 November 2018
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Hello Dion ,
ReplyDeleteThis is Sanele from Room 8 I would like to say that you have done a great job because you set it out perfectly and it looks tidy I also like the way you came up with a homeless man with a sigh saying Where is the Love its really cool. Something that you can work on is to add a little more information.
Question: Why was the homeless man sitting by the road with a sighn saying where is the love?
Thank you Sanele for the awesome feedback!
DeleteIts all right anyday
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