Descriptive Writing

What we had to do: We had to make a descriptive piece of writing with some pictures we had to choose one and write about it.

I was standing still it was cold and I was cold. I could see a man outside the window but it was really blurry. As I moved sticks kept breaking and cracking it was if a bone cracked. By legs were as weak as thin wood and stiff as sticks and bricks .The house looked dead inside… I started to walk in the house and then the house started shaking and the a big gust of freezing iced wind came blowing on by face and by legs.

I think the house was alive somehow. I went in the house and I was scared to death everything was really creaky and unstable like I was just about to fall into the wood surface in the house. When I went further in the house I could hear a girl crying it sounded like a baby, it kept getting louder and louder until I could barely hear anything I was deaf. I then closed my eyes and the noise was gone. I founded it hard to breath and hear and I heard a whisper in my ear but couldn’t quite get what that person or something was saying.

The ground started shaking and it was like an earthquake, I suddenly fell down on the wood surface because of how unstable the floor beneath me was. I could see a blurry figure and I tried to get out and I ran as fast as I could, I could hardly breath and I could smell rotten meat everywhere.

When I went out the house It was sunny and everything was green and bright. I just wanted to sleep so I went to my house and I could hear birds singing and than I went to sleep and forgot that anything ever happened that day.

What I found easy: Was to make sentences because there was very interesting picture. 

What I found hard: Was making sure the reader gets hooked.

What we had to do: Was make a piece of writing about a picture we had to choose and make sure we make it exciting and make sure we use similes , adverbs, adjectives etc.