Me and my friends were searching a abandoned house as we heard a scream. We were all clueless as to who made the sound but we heard it at the attic. We saw a painting and it had really realistic eyes and behind it said this place is haunted. I quickly ran out the door but the door slammed and made a huge sound.
My friends wanted to leave but I didn’t because i wanted to search some more. I looked behind my back and I saw a black ghostly figure and all my friends had vanished and the picture was gone too. I came out the attic hoping to go home but I slipped on blood and hit my head feeling weak. I had woken up in this room with blood everywhere and I was on a bed with the same painting that I saw earlier.
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ReplyDeleteDear Dion,
ReplyDeleteYour Story was amazing and had lots of detail. Everything was perfect. Maybe next time you can finish up :).
Yours Sincerely
Zipporah