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Friday, 28 July 2017

Frosty Friday

WALT: Write A Weather Poem Using Strong Verbs
Frosty Friday

I went to the window they all shout, I wonder what they are talking about. The hail looked fun, I wished I had a hot cross bun. Going outside doing our work, This is the place where worms lerk. I'm really cold but I'm fine, Here I am making a rhyme. The hail was really gone, Just because the powerful sun.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous26 October 2017 at 12:09

    Hi Dion,
    I really enjoyed reading your rhyme about frosty days, I especially enjoy seeing frost across the grass. Worms do enjoy going out when its raining, no clue why though.
    Next time could you include a beautiful image? It'd really extend the imagination of viewers.

    Don't forget to not put capital letters after commas (,) unless its a name or I.

    Thanks~

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