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Tuesday, 22 August 2017

Cool Family

WALT:To write an interesting poem about our own Family

Cool Family
My family is cool that's why it’s called cool family, If you really meet them you’ll live really happily. We go to church we start to pray hoping for a better day. My family’s cool and fun,
My Dad really likes me as a son.
My brother’s mean and tough, When I try to fight him he’s a bit rough.
My Dad and Mum are the best, I’m very tired I want a rest.
I’m really happy we are smooth as butter, I’m like a butterfly because I flutter
My family’s the most important thing to me, Just try to meet them and you will see.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Dion, I really liked your cool family poem it is really Descriptive. also maybe next time you could put a picture so it is much better. But I still like it.

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  2. Hi Dion, Awesome rhyme of a cool family it was really good and sounded awesome.Is the cool family your actual family in real life?

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