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Monday, 6 May 2019

Pig the Pug

WALT: Write a character and use 'show not tell' in our writing

What we had to do: was make a character description about either Trevor the sausage dog or Pig the pug. These characters are from the story we read Pig the star.

What I found easy: was to get ideas from my character Pig the pug. What I found interesting: was using show not tell it was kinda hard

Pig the pug was not skinny at all and he had eyes like a tennis ball. He had really old like skin and he was very self-confident. He has very bumpy skin and smells like wet clothes. Pig the pug has really big legs. His little tiny legs have a really stressful time carrying his weight.

The has really bad against others and he likes to show off. I guess you could say that this pug dog is self minded, he only cares for himself and never cares for anyone else. Pig the pug is also really greedy at times and he probably treats people like slaves. I don't think that Pig the pug has done anything nice to Trevor the sausage dog.

His toxic behaviour is really appalling and it makes his relationship with others really thin. Pig the pug is really selfish to Trevor the sausage dog and it makes Trevor sad. Trevor the sausage dog is very humble and he always tries his best to ignore Pig the pugs annoying behaviour. When Trevor tries to shine, Pig the pug always tries to steal the credit.

The pug is a really bad and messy dog, he throws his belongings all over the place. When he tries to put on some clothes he puts it everywhere but where it’s meant to go. His bed has so many stains that it’s changing the colour of the bed itself. Pig the pug puts his belongings everywhere whilst Trevor puts his belongings in the right place.

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