Write about a stubborn explorer who catches a thief
The stubborn explorer who finds a thief
There was once a thief and he stole jewels and other things for a living. He would steal anything that looked pleasant to him and what looks really appealing. He was always watched by, by this stubborn explorer. This Stubborn explorer would always want to catch and find a thief himself, that was his dream. He was very stubborn and he knew that catching thieves was going to be a hard catch. But he wasn’t going to give up and he was going to fulfill his dreams, so he set up cameras and he waited and waited…
While he watched the cameras catch what seems like nothing until the 11:00 pm mark hit that's when he started hearing clunking and bashing. He knew that that was the man so he waited for the next day so that he could catch him in the trap and make sure that he never steals again. The next day… He got up, did the same old thing and then he went to work. He went and sat down where he could see the cameras and where he had set up the traps he waited and waited until it was 11:00 pm
When it hit 11:00 pm things started happening and he just waited for the man to fall for the trap and get caught he was exactly 1 meter from the trap. He slowly got closer and closer and closer until snap! The target got captured! He went for the investigation and he made sure that the man had gotten what he deserved. When he got the man he made sure that he would end up in prison, so he took him to the police to get investigated. He celebrated and was tearing up so he ate some ice cream. That was the story of a man, a very stubborn man who caught a thief.
What I learned is: How to write with a random story starter and how to keep writing for a long period of time. I also learned how to use ellipses and to use commas in my writing. Using this will make my writing flow and it's not just a big pile of mess and to make sure that the reader pauses and is not continually talking. I also made sure that I didn't muck around and made sure that I did my work well,we had a time span of minutes to find a story starter. I also learned that Their is a site where you can get story starters and that site is very useful.
What I enjoyed: What I enjoyed is writing for a long time and making sure that stay focused when I write. I also enjoyed the way it was really silent and no one was talking, I think that, that was really nice and helpful. I liked how I got really funny and interesting story starters and the story starters were pretty easy. I really enjoyed the writing.
Friday, 14 June 2019
Friday, 7 June 2019
The causes and effects of poverty
What creates poverty? Climate, Population, Economics and Politics are all causes of this… But do you know why?
Climate
Climate can really change someone’s life because having no rain can lead to dehydration, crops dying and can even lead to death. People tend to walk miles and miles not for exercise but to get a bucket of water for themselves or for their family. Sometimes people don’t have enough water for everyone so some people have to go without. Having rain is alright but having a lot of rain can give people floods and drown plants. Having no rain makes the country or the place you live in have droughts and it makes the plants dry.
Population
Having a big population can make running a family more easy but there is a con to this people have to get more resources to go around the family. When having a big population it makes it harder for people to get the common necessities like food and water. Lots of countries have a big population and birth rate, this can lead up to having no money and no money leads to poverty.
Economics
Some countries people don't get paid as much so they are considered a poor country also known as a (Less Economically Developed Country). I think that having less money than the other countries is really unfair and some kids have to go through child labour because they need the money. When kids go through child labour they don’t get that much money and they probably get a few cents even if they work a whole day.
Politics
Politics is a really bad thing because having Governments making bad choices can make things very hard for others. For example there might be a very dry season so the Government may raise the price for water or maybe they are running low on resources so they have to raise the price of the resources. This whole Government thing can lead to civil wars and civil wars are people arguing about Governments making wrong choices and when that happens people get mad and can make the country they live in a very unstable country. What I think is really unfair is people, the poor people get poorer and the richer get richer.
What Causes and Makes Poverty?
What we had to do: what we had to do was make a descriptive piece of writing and explain the differences between a LEDC (least economically developed country) and a MEDC (Most economically developed country. We had to look at different aspects like, Climate, Population, Economics and Politics.
The causes and effects of poverty
What creates poverty? Climate, Population, Economics and Politics are all causes of this… But do you know why?
Climate
Climate can really change someone’s life because having no rain can lead to dehydration, crops dying and can even lead to death. People tend to walk miles and miles not for exercise but to get a bucket of water for themselves or for their family. Sometimes people don’t have enough water for everyone so some people have to go without. Having rain is alright but having a lot of rain can give people floods and drown plants. Having no rain makes the country or the place you live in have droughts and it makes the plants dry.
Population
Having a big population can make running a family more easy but there is a con to this people have to get more resources to go around the family. When having a big population it makes it harder for people to get the common necessities like food and water. Lots of countries have a big population and birth rate, this can lead up to having no money and no money leads to poverty.
Economics
Some countries people don't get paid as much so they are considered a poor country also known as a (Less Economically Developed Country). I think that having less money than the other countries is really unfair and some kids have to go through child labour because they need the money. When kids go through child labour they don’t get that much money and they probably get a few cents even if they work a whole day.
Politics
Politics is a really bad thing because having Governments making bad choices can make things very hard for others. For example there might be a very dry season so the Government may raise the price for water or maybe they are running low on resources so they have to raise the price of the resources. This whole Government thing can lead to civil wars and civil wars are people arguing about Governments making wrong choices and when that happens people get mad and can make the country they live in a very unstable country. What I think is really unfair is people, the poor people get poorer and the richer get richer.
The causes and effects of poverty
What creates poverty? Climate, Population, Economics and Politics are all causes of this… But do you know why?
Climate
Climate can really change someone’s life because having no rain can lead to dehydration, crops dying and can even lead to death. People tend to walk miles and miles not for exercise but to get a bucket of water for themselves or for their family. Sometimes people don’t have enough water for everyone so some people have to go without. Having rain is alright but having a lot of rain can give people floods and drown plants. Having no rain makes the country or the place you live in have droughts and it makes the plants dry.
Population
Having a big population can make running a family more easy but there is a con to this people have to get more resources to go around the family. When having a big population it makes it harder for people to get the common necessities like food and water. Lots of countries have a big population and birth rate, this can lead up to having no money and no money leads to poverty.
Economics
Some countries people don't get paid as much so they are considered a poor country also known as a (Less Economically Developed Country). I think that having less money than the other countries is really unfair and some kids have to go through child labour because they need the money. When kids go through child labour they don’t get that much money and they probably get a few cents even if they work a whole day.
Politics
Politics is a really bad thing because having Governments making bad choices can make things very hard for others. For example there might be a very dry season so the Government may raise the price for water or maybe they are running low on resources so they have to raise the price of the resources. This whole Government thing can lead to civil wars and civil wars are people arguing about Governments making wrong choices and when that happens people get mad and can make the country they live in a very unstable country. What I think is really unfair is people, the poor people get poorer and the richer get richer.
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integrated learning,
Writing
Thursday, 23 May 2019
The Holy Spirit
What we had to do: Was make a google drawing about R.E. and make a blog post about it. What I did was the tongues of fire and the flame or fire represents that.
What I found hard was: Being patient because tracing is really time consuming
What I found easy was: The tracing because although it was time consuming it was really easy
What I found hard was: Being patient because tracing is really time consuming
What I found easy was: The tracing because although it was time consuming it was really easy
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R.E.
Friday, 17 May 2019
Pink Shirt Day
PINK SHIRT DAY
Today we have pink shirt day and we celebrate pink shirt day because people get bullied and we need to show that we shouldn’t be judged by our covers. Most people think that pink is only for girls but in our school lots of boys are wearing pink.
What I found interesting: Was how much people wore pink and I thought no one would wear pink.
What we had to do: Was to make a blog post about our event about pink shirt day and we had do describe what we have to do.
What I found hard: Was trying to find pink shirts or anything pink to wear
Today we have pink shirt day and we celebrate pink shirt day because people get bullied and we need to show that we shouldn’t be judged by our covers. Most people think that pink is only for girls but in our school lots of boys are wearing pink.
What I found interesting: Was how much people wore pink and I thought no one would wear pink.
What we had to do: Was to make a blog post about our event about pink shirt day and we had do describe what we have to do.
What I found hard: Was trying to find pink shirts or anything pink to wear
Thursday, 9 May 2019
Mother's Day Character Description
My Mum
Walt: ‘Use show not tell’ in our writing and to write a character description.My Mum has been in this world for the last 39 years as for the last 12 years she has looked after me, she has chocolate brown eyes, long hair and is very short. She has a lot of shoes, clothes but is never satisfied.
She cooks me food and makes my meals and sometimes I get lucky and get take away. She mostly likes talking about work with her friends. She likes sleeping just like me. She doesn’t really give me money probably because she thinks I don't need it or something.
My Mum shows me affection by taking care of me when I’m not feeling well. She gives me the necessities I need for school and other things. When I need something she will try her best to get it or make it.
She really likes shopping and my Dad doesn’t really enjoy shopping. I think that my Mum uses like nearly all her time shopping but not all days, my Mom is a really busy lady.
What we did: Was to write to our Mothers about a character description including them.
What I found interesting: Was using show not tell in my writing.
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Writing
Monday, 6 May 2019
Pig the Pug
WALT: Write a character and use 'show not tell' in our writing
What we had to do: was make a character description about either Trevor the sausage dog or Pig the pug. These characters are from the story we read Pig the star.
What I found easy: was to get ideas from my character Pig the pug. What I found interesting: was using show not tell it was kinda hard
Pig the pug was not skinny at all and he had eyes like a tennis ball. He had really old like skin and he was very self-confident. He has very bumpy skin and smells like wet clothes. Pig the pug has really big legs. His little tiny legs have a really stressful time carrying his weight.
The has really bad against others and he likes to show off. I guess you could say that this pug dog is self minded, he only cares for himself and never cares for anyone else. Pig the pug is also really greedy at times and he probably treats people like slaves. I don't think that Pig the pug has done anything nice to Trevor the sausage dog.
His toxic behaviour is really appalling and it makes his relationship with others really thin. Pig the pug is really selfish to Trevor the sausage dog and it makes Trevor sad. Trevor the sausage dog is very humble and he always tries his best to ignore Pig the pugs annoying behaviour. When Trevor tries to shine, Pig the pug always tries to steal the credit.
The pug is a really bad and messy dog, he throws his belongings all over the place. When he tries to put on some clothes he puts it everywhere but where it’s meant to go. His bed has so many stains that it’s changing the colour of the bed itself. Pig the pug puts his belongings everywhere whilst Trevor puts his belongings in the right place.
What we had to do: was make a character description about either Trevor the sausage dog or Pig the pug. These characters are from the story we read Pig the star.
What I found easy: was to get ideas from my character Pig the pug. What I found interesting: was using show not tell it was kinda hard
Pig the pug was not skinny at all and he had eyes like a tennis ball. He had really old like skin and he was very self-confident. He has very bumpy skin and smells like wet clothes. Pig the pug has really big legs. His little tiny legs have a really stressful time carrying his weight.
The has really bad against others and he likes to show off. I guess you could say that this pug dog is self minded, he only cares for himself and never cares for anyone else. Pig the pug is also really greedy at times and he probably treats people like slaves. I don't think that Pig the pug has done anything nice to Trevor the sausage dog.
His toxic behaviour is really appalling and it makes his relationship with others really thin. Pig the pug is really selfish to Trevor the sausage dog and it makes Trevor sad. Trevor the sausage dog is very humble and he always tries his best to ignore Pig the pugs annoying behaviour. When Trevor tries to shine, Pig the pug always tries to steal the credit.
The pug is a really bad and messy dog, he throws his belongings all over the place. When he tries to put on some clothes he puts it everywhere but where it’s meant to go. His bed has so many stains that it’s changing the colour of the bed itself. Pig the pug puts his belongings everywhere whilst Trevor puts his belongings in the right place.
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