Description: We had to make a painting and make a poem and put the poem over the painting in a google drawing.
Reflection: What I found hard was making the poem and not using the same words as well as keeping it interesting.
Tuesday 3 July 2018
Matariki Poster
WALT:Recreate a famous artist's painting, while incorporating New Zealand themes and celebrations
Description: We had to make a painting and make a poem and put the poem over the painting in a google drawing.
Reflection: What I found hard was making the poem and not using the same words as well as keeping it interesting.
Description: We had to make a painting and make a poem and put the poem over the painting in a google drawing.
Reflection: What I found hard was making the poem and not using the same words as well as keeping it interesting.
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hello Dion, this is Lance from room 6 and I like how your poem rhymes but next time you can make your poem more interesting by adding more big words, other than that your poem is great.
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ReplyDeleteHello Dion,
ReplyDeleteIt's Nathan from room 6 I like how you made your poem really interesting, all those big words you added in your poem is great. I suggest to you is to make all of them rhyme. Other than that your poem is wonderful
Salutations Dion,
ReplyDeleteI am Sione from Room 6. I love how you used different words to describe how the stars shine. The only thing that bothers me is the last bit. Instead of 'I wink at them back' you could do 'I wink back at them', but other than that little bit of detail, your poem was fantastic.
Hello Dion,
ReplyDeletethis is Marcus from room 6, I like how you've kept your poem interesting about how they glow and gleam. probably next time you should make your poem rhyme.
Hello Dion,
ReplyDeleteThis is Tama from Room 6 I love your work of art and your poem as well good job you did great and i can not what when you can in my class next year and you can do more good art in here. did you make that because it looks good and it ready spurts your poem for Matariki good work.
Hiya Dion ,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem and painting they look really nice. I like how in your poem you used descriptive language. Next time maybe you could go the extra mile and maybe even make your poem rhyme!. Otherwise this is reat work !
-Nikita